Sneezingnonstop Posted August 13, 2017 Share Posted August 13, 2017 (edited) This potential sequel seems like its just as much gold as the entire story before it!!!! Can't wait to see what this turns into and see how it continues, it really is amazing!!!!!!! Edited August 13, 2017 by Sneezingnonstop Link to comment
Alabaster Posted August 13, 2017 Share Posted August 13, 2017 YES. I wanted it to be him! Link to comment
Mr. Black Cherry Berry Tea Posted August 14, 2017 Share Posted August 14, 2017 Hey, just wanted to stop by and say this was an awesome story! Really enjoyed it, looking forward to the sequel! Link to comment
zneeze Posted August 17, 2017 Share Posted August 17, 2017 I know I'm late to return to the party but I just finished reading this. What an imagination you have! This was one of the most surreal, fantastical sort of stories I've ever read - not just on this board, but in general. You had a deeply original idea, believed in it and followed through with great execution. And the sneezing fits and spellings were hot, obviously, if that needed saying xD Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us, @randomguy! Link to comment
Show&tell Posted August 17, 2017 Share Posted August 17, 2017 Omg this was really amazing! It also struck a nerve as I have been talking in the obs section about my OWN big sneeze problems. I need a "sneeze mentor" also! God that would be so hot... I hope you post more Link to comment
Alabaster Posted August 17, 2017 Share Posted August 17, 2017 20 hours ago, zneeze said: I know I'm late to return to the party but I just finished reading this. What an imagination you have! This was one of the most surreal, fantastical sort of stories I've ever read - not just on this board, but in general. You had a deeply original idea, believed in it and followed through with great execution. And the sneezing fits and spellings were hot, obviously, if that needed saying xD Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us, @randomguy! Yes! I wholeheartedly agree. Link to comment
randomguy Posted September 10, 2017 Author Share Posted September 10, 2017 (edited) I know this thread is pretty much dead so this technically qualifies as necroposting, but I promise I'm not doing it to bump my story back to the front page! I haven't had the chance to reply to the thoughtful comments you've all left because I've been holed up writing the sequel. Well, I finally marathoned my way through it last night, and "Roxanne and Michael" is now up! Now that' I've finished, I wanted to come back and thank you again for your kind words. @HideAndGoSneeze, thank you for encouraging me to write the sequel. Not sure if it'll live up to expectations, but your comment at least gave me a lot of the perspective I needed to move forward. Thanks a lot! @Show&tell, it was really kind of you to come check out my story after I posted on your obs. I hope you've had luck with getting those big sneezes under control! @Alabaster, so glad you approve of the ending. Very cool of you to post twice! @Sneezingnonstop, thanks again for sticking with me from the beginning. Reading your comments meant a lot. @Mr. Black Cherry Berry Tea, I admire your grit for reading the whole thing start to finish, presumably without following it as I was posting. All in all, it's about 26 pages long, so that's no small feat. And @zneeze, I just wanted to say thank you for being the first post on this thread. It absolutely killed me that you got the ending right from the start without even knowing it! The sequel is up now; I hope to see some of you there! Edited September 10, 2017 by randomguy Added links to the sequel Link to comment
Stimuli Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 Now, I admit I am a bad reader, if one can say so. My ADHD gives me the attention span of a common house fly, and I therefor have extreme difficulties picking up books and just reading from start to finish, but this story... It had me hooked! At the end I wasn't even in it for the sneeze (pun intended), I was captivated, I HAD to read the whole darn thing! I'd give my arms and legs for this being made into a movie! A... Anyway ehehe thank you so much for writing and posting this Link to comment
deere Posted September 14, 2017 Share Posted September 14, 2017 On September 10, 2017 at 7:19 PM, randomguy said: I know this thread is pretty much dead so this technically qualifies as necroposting, but I promise I'm not doing it to bump my story back to the front page! Well, I'm glad you did, because otherwise I might've missed it... Great writing! Link to comment
Anmeroth Posted September 24, 2017 Share Posted September 24, 2017 I saw your sequel and thought I might check out the first part of the story and omfg... this is so good that I had to leave a comment!! This is an absolutely great story and relationship you've built and now it's time for me to hop on over to the sequel! Link to comment
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