Shamaël Posted January 14, 2017 Share Posted January 14, 2017 (edited) ... Edited June 7, 2020 by Yerma Link to comment
Subtly Clashing Wishes Posted January 15, 2017 Share Posted January 15, 2017 This is amazing! OMG! Sneezy Spock and fascinated Nyota--this is a fantastic story. And clueless Jim creating the whole wonderful mess. This bit is perfect because I think it describes us so well. Ouch. This one might have hurt. A part of her felt sorry for him. Really. The other part… Well, the other part was yelling and screaming and rolling on the floor (if there was a floor in her mind) in pure ecstasy. In these kinds of situations, she completely understood her boyfriend, divided in two irreconcilable halves. Sometimes she wondered if she wasn’t half-alien too. Thank you, thank you! Link to comment
cally Posted January 15, 2017 Share Posted January 15, 2017 It was absolutely no problem to help proofread such an adorable piece. I look forward to reading more of your work. @Sanguine Cheerful Worrier I am very glad you enjoyed, as I've been keeping this a secret for over a week! Link to comment
AngelEyes Posted January 17, 2017 Share Posted January 17, 2017 OMG. I adore you. This is just...yeah. Incredible. On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: She knew what he was doing. It was the game “I don’t feel so good, therefore I’m trying to divert your mind from it.” So Spock! On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: And of course it had to be James Inconvenient Kirk. LOL On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: - I did interrupt something, didn’t I? He whispered. I can totally see Kirk's look. On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: The Vulcan, shoulders heaving, breath hitching, eyes half-closed, was absolutely not in control anymore. Oh dear! On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: She couldn’t explain to him that the absolute lack of control was the best thing of all, could she? It sounded heretic for a Vulcan. Exactly! On 1/14/2017 at 1:35 PM, Aliena H. said: Ouch. This one might have hurt. A part of her felt sorry for him. Really. The other part… Well, the other part was yelling and screaming and rolling on the floor (if there was a floor in her mind) in pure ecstasy. In these kinds of situations, she completely understood her boyfriend, divided in two irreconcilable halves. Sometimes she wondered if she wasn’t half-alien too. So true. Link to comment
Shamaël Posted January 21, 2017 Author Share Posted January 21, 2017 @Sanguine Cheerful Worrier and @cally and @AngelEyes: Thank you very much for the feedback! I'm really glad you liked it. I must confess that I feel like Nyota very often, torn between excitment and guilt, when someone sneezes next to me... I will probably start a drabble thread, with some Star Trek and some Sherlock (and a couple of other fandoms). Link to comment
AngelEyes Posted January 23, 2017 Share Posted January 23, 2017 On 1/21/2017 at 10:19 AM, Aliena H. said: I will probably start a drabble thread, with some Star Trek and some Sherlock (and a couple of other fandoms). Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment
Subtly Clashing Wishes Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 On January 21, 2017 at 11:19 AM, Aliena H. said: I will probably start a drabble thread, with some Star Trek and some Sherlock (and a couple of other fandoms). Do we get to hold you to this? Link to comment
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