Rook Posted February 4, 2016 Author Share Posted February 4, 2016 That was really cute I think brain dead is good for you.... HahaBRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAINS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment
Garnet Posted February 4, 2016 Share Posted February 4, 2016 Well? You seem to have ignored most of the advice offered thus far. Paragraphs would really help, though. Really. Most important thing. In the meantime, keep working at it! Link to comment
Rook Posted February 4, 2016 Author Share Posted February 4, 2016 Well? You seem to have ignored most of the advice offered thus far. Paragraphs would really help, though. Really. Most important thing.In the meantime, keep working at it! I promise I am not trying to ignore anyone's advice I just don't know how to break it into paragraphs with out confusing myself Link to comment
Arty Posted February 16, 2016 Share Posted February 16, 2016 Garnet is right. Paragraphs will definitely break down the story and make it easier to read. Hopefully this will help you ok? https://ylvapublishing.wordpress.com/2013/08/18/paragraph-structure-in-fiction/ Link to comment
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