Dylan Posted January 29, 2014 Share Posted January 29, 2014 So, umm, I've been lurking around like a... lurker... and I thought I may post something :3Please, don't kill me if it's bad......."Thank you for coming, we've been One Direction!"Harry, Zayn, Niall, Louis and Liam ran off the stage of the London O2 Arena."That was awesome! I can't believe you poured water all over us all Liam..." Harry exclaimed. They'd just finished their last show for a few days, and were allowed to relax. On stage, Harry dared Liam to pour water all over everyone, so he did- including himself. Liam grinned."I never thought you would doubt my daring...ness" "Is that even a word?" Niall asked, shivering in the air vents cooling breeze. He sniffed quietly."Boys, come here, the bus is taking you to a hotel for the rest of the week," Paul, their tour manager, put his head round the door. The singers looked at each other, and before Paul had figured out what was happening, all five band members were sprinting down the hall in a race to the bus.*In the bus*Zayn was changing whilst Louis and Niall chatted about weird things they did on stage, and Harry and Liam were making faces with towels over their damp hair."Playing leapfrog was so much fun, you know I'm so good at it..." Niall said grinning cheekily."It was awesome! That is the one thing I can actually do well," Louis replied with an equally cheeky grin."Well I would like, fall on my face , so, y'know..." Zayn had come out in sweats and a t-shirt."Niall?! Why haven't you dried your hair?" Liam interrogated him. Niall shrugged, and tried to discretely sniff. It only just couldn't be heard, since Paul told them all to sit, and get some rest. He also threw Niall a towel, which hit Niall in the head. Louis was rolling on the floor with laughter, and Harry, Zayn and Liam were clutching each other in order to stay up.EVENTUALLY, they calm down, Zayn and Harry fall asleep, Liam listening to music and Louis playing a game with Niall. About 10 minutes after they leave....Suddenly, Niall turned sharply to the left and stifled quietly into his elbow." He'nxgh...heh...hu'nxch..."Louis stopped playing the game and looked at Niall."...Bless You" He sounded surprised. Louis couldn't remember ever hearing Niall sneeze, even if it was just because they were next to each other."Uh... thanks" Niall looked away, embarrassed. He carries on with the game, saying no more of it. Louis keeps looking at him to make sure he's ok. He seems to be, so Louis guesses it was an isolated incident. Until..."Hu'nxch" Niall stifles into his elbow again. Then turns and stifles another quiet sneeze. And another. He looks up to see Louis' blue eyes staring at him, concern amongst them."Bless you, are you okay? You're not getting sick are you?" Louis asks."Uh...thandks, and no I'm ndot getting sick," Niall says congestedly. He mentally curses the congestion for settling in his voice.So, lemme know if I should continue, and I will :3 Link to comment
SpookyScarySkeleton Posted January 29, 2014 Share Posted January 29, 2014 When I saw that you wrote it . I remember you from the Drabble thread . You finally took a crack at writing something and it's amazing . This is your first fic?. Wow I never would've guessed. It's much too good Please do continue if you have the time ! . So adorable <3 Link to comment
Dylan Posted January 29, 2014 Author Share Posted January 29, 2014 When I saw that you wrote it . I remember you from the Drabble thread . You finally took a crack at writing something and it's amazing . This is your first fic?. Wow I never would've guessed. It's much too good Please do continue if you have the time ! . So adorable <3Aww, thanks! I honestly didn't think it was that good, but I'll continue Link to comment
SpookyScarySkeleton Posted January 29, 2014 Share Posted January 29, 2014 When I saw that you wrote it . I remember you from the Drabble thread . You finally took a crack at writing something and it's amazing . This is your first fic?. Wow I never would've guessed. It's much too good Please do continue if you have the time ! . So adorable <3Aww, thanks! I honestly didn't think it was that good, but I'll continue Yay ! Link to comment
LiveToBeMe Posted January 29, 2014 Share Posted January 29, 2014 whoa 0.0 I never would have guessed it was your first fanfic, this is so good love! And don't worry, I was very shy about posting stories on the forum for awhile too. It will eventually wear off continue when you can! Link to comment
Dylan Posted January 30, 2014 Author Share Posted January 30, 2014 whoa 0.0 I never would have guessed it was your first fanfic, this is so good love! And don't worry, I was very shy about posting stories on the forum for awhile too. It will eventually wear off continue when you can!Thanks, and I'm so glad it'll wear off I'll continue Link to comment
LilaBerri Posted January 31, 2014 Share Posted January 31, 2014 Aww it's so cute! More please Link to comment
Dylan Posted January 31, 2014 Author Share Posted January 31, 2014 So for whatever reason, people seem to like this... O.o anyways, I'll continue.*In the hotel* (about four hours later)One Direction walked into the five bedded hotel suite, looking around in approval. The room was large, and was painted medium red and a rich golden tone. The five beds were king size, and there was a wall TV and Xbox. Zayn yawned loudly, and eyed the beds."Just looking at these beds makes me want to go to sleep" He said"I'm not tired! I want to stay up all night!" Louis was unaware of the song quote until about a second later..."I wanna stay up all night and jump around until we see the sunI wanna stay up all night and find a girl and tell her she's the one..." Harry and Liam sang together."...Hold onto to the feeling and don't let it goCos we got the floor now get out of controlI wanna stay up all night and do it all with LOU..." Niall shouted loudly at the end of the chorus, making everyone chuckle at Louis expression. However, Liam had heard a hoarse edge to Niall's voice, and worried that the he could be getting sick. Almost as if to confirm his thoughts, Niall coughed roughly, unaware that two sets of concerned eyes were keeping a close watch on him. But as soon as he began, he was engulfed in a fit of painful sounding coughs, which he muffled against his sleeve. All four boys looked up, and Harry winced at the sight of him."...Niall, are you ok? You sound awful" Liam said once the fit had finished. The blonde looked up to see Louis staring at him with a disappointed look on his face."Umm...yeah, I'm fine... excuse mbe," Niall said, but the effect was ruined by the gravelly quality of his voice. He cleared his throat, careful not to set off another fit of painful coughs."Seriously dude, you sound like you're dying..." Zayn pointed out. ​sorry it's so short, but should Niall deny it, or should he give in and let the boys look after him?? Lemme know so I can add more Link to comment
SpookyScarySkeleton Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 Awesome ! I'll be adding another part.. to the mortal instrements fic.yee yee c: Link to comment
Amberlight24 Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 This is very cute!!! Link to comment
Dylan Posted February 1, 2014 Author Share Posted February 1, 2014 Awesome ! I'll be adding another part.. to the mortal instrements fic.yee yee c:Yay!!!! I will add more to This is very cute!!! Thanks! Link to comment
LilaBerri Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 It's so cute! I love it Link to comment
LiveToBeMe Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Awww baby Nailler so cutenn Link to comment
Dylan Posted February 2, 2014 Author Share Posted February 2, 2014 It's so cute! I love itThanks! I'll add more some time today =3Awww baby Nailler so cutennHehe =3 I know it's weird, but I want to 'aww' at my own work... O.o Link to comment
Sophie<3 Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Aww... cute story! (: I really like this! Sick Niall... <3 Link to comment
Dylan Posted February 2, 2014 Author Share Posted February 2, 2014 Aww... cute story! (: I really like this! Sick Niall... <3Thanks! I'm glad everyone likes this :3 Link to comment
LiveToBeMe Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 It's not weird it shows you're getting some more confidence Link to comment
Dylan Posted February 6, 2014 Author Share Posted February 6, 2014 It's not weird it shows you're getting some more confidenceOh, right :3 that's cool Link to comment
Dylan Posted February 6, 2014 Author Share Posted February 6, 2014 I HAVE FLIPPING WRITERS BLOCK, ANYONE HAVE IDEAS FOR TORTURING THE BOYS WHAT COULD HAPPEN NEXT???? Link to comment
babygirl45 Posted February 7, 2014 Share Posted February 7, 2014 Niall could get the rest of the band sick one by one and the they have to cancel an upcoming concert because the whole band is sick. Link to comment
Dylan Posted February 7, 2014 Author Share Posted February 7, 2014 That's an awesome idea! I'm so using it who shall I torture get sick first? Link to comment
babygirl45 Posted February 9, 2014 Share Posted February 9, 2014 You should get Louis sick first Link to comment
Dylan Posted February 10, 2014 Author Share Posted February 10, 2014 You should get Louis sick firstOk, I will! :3 Link to comment
ephemeral Posted April 11, 2014 Share Posted April 11, 2014 Please continue this it's so cute and definitely get Louis sick first, lots of sneezy Louis Link to comment
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