sneeze Posted December 1, 2013 Share Posted December 1, 2013 Soooooooo... Right now I have a really sneezy mind... So please ignore this post. Well it's a 1D fic... *runs away*Your POV:You wake up next to you're boyfriend Liam with a tickle in your nose. Sniffling, you run into the bathroom and lock the door. After shoving bath towels in the cracks, you finally allowed yourself to sneeze. You take a small breath and throw your head forward several times, all completely silent sneezes. You've always been really self-conscious of your sneezes for some reason, even if they are almost always silent. Liam starts waking up. "Babe?" he murmurs. "I'm right here, love," you say, grabbing a tissue on the way. You quietly blow your nose and crawl into the warm blankets.Hope it isn't too bad, please give me feedback!!! Thx Link to comment
SpookyBoi Posted December 1, 2013 Share Posted December 1, 2013 You should write more. It's good and should be continued. I'm interested in knowing what Liam wants. Link to comment
All Time No Posted December 1, 2013 Share Posted December 1, 2013 It's good, I agree with the Doctor96, continue it! Link to comment
SpookyScarySkeleton Posted December 1, 2013 Share Posted December 1, 2013 It's interesting enough do continue Link to comment
LiveToBeMe Posted December 1, 2013 Share Posted December 1, 2013 Very cute and I know how you feel. I'm kinda embarassed to share my writing sometimes. But you did a very good job on the intro Link to comment
Amberlight24 Posted December 11, 2013 Share Posted December 11, 2013 very sweet I hope you continue Link to comment
sneeze Posted February 19, 2014 Author Share Posted February 19, 2014 Oh thx I'm having a mini writers block because I haven't posted in so long :/ Link to comment
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