Makoto's Misfortune - Free! Iwatobi Swim Club [2/2]

[redbluemoon]

I wish there was more. This is too quality. Well not really too much but it's PERFECT. You should write for a series or something because you've got talent. Like someone said before, you can drag things out without it seeming dragged out, it just naturally happened that way from Makoto's perspective as farr as we can tell. I was enthralled. I must see if you've written more because that was above and beyond.

[Melody]

oh.my.god. This fic is absoutlely priceless. Your writing is flawless and eloquent down to every word. I haven't even watched the anime but now I really really want to. This was just beautiful. To many feels. I need more of your writing I need more of this fandom :D