Changes + Sequel [Supernatural, M, 14 + 3 parts.]

[SexualOddity]

“Uhh … uh'hih …” His eyelashes were fluttering, upper lip trembling slightly. “Huh'ih …” He stopped, scrubbed at his nose, and relaxed.



“Lose something?”



“Hilarious.”

Ha! Awesome.

I love the way you write them. It's so in character that I can hear their voices as I read the dialogue. And I LOVE how grumpy Sam is. Grumpy Sam is one of my favourite Sams. All his little grumbles after he sneezes and being very-much-not-amused by Dean. And I love how Dean basically lives to irritate him.

And your plots are so complex and established and well-written (I kind of like these gaps between updates too cos each time I get to read again from the start and discover them ALL OVER AGAIN). And I've never read a fic about mermaids before... I am intrigued.

So yeah... this is love.

[Pyrus_Fangmon]

Sam didn't answer, and Dean looked over to see him facing almost into the back of the seat, ribcage rising and falling with hitching breaths. “Huh'ihh … h'ihh …”



“Woah, hey!” Dean seized his elbow, forcing Sam to sneeze against his other shoulder. “Don't go messing up my car.”



“I … uhh … uhh'HUHShoo!” Sam squinted at him reproachfully. “That's not how it works.”



“Sure it does.” Starting up the Impala's engine, Dean saw his brother building up to another sneeze, and chuckled. “Dude, I'm the one who jumped in the freezing goddamn ocean. You don't get to sneeze.”

DEAN! You and you're teasing! And freezing ocean you say? Dean-o better bundle up

“Uhh … uh'hih …” His eyelashes were fluttering, upper lip trembling slightly. “Huh'ih …” He stopped, scrubbed at his nose, and relaxed.



“Lose something?”



“Hilarious.”

Just perfect!

[Anilkex]

Ooooh! I...um. Yessssss! Read waaaay too fast. Gonna go reread it.

[HPG]

You're like a Sasquatch snot-fest

Yasss

“You are such a jerk,” muttered Sam, resting his head against the seatbelt. “Uhh … uh'hih …” His eyelashes were fluttering, upper lip trembling slightly. “Huh'ih …” He stopped, scrubbed at his nose, and relaxed.

“Lose something?”

“Hilarious.”

That's such a Dean thing - I love it.