M_Twi_Love Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 "Wow, youve never actually missed, Katniss," He was referring to my bad aim. I'd already missed three deer. I was missing because of my terrible allergies. I was allergic to spring, basically. "Sorry. My eyes are all watery and stuff," I sniffled. "You should go home then. I could drop off something for your family-" I cut him off. "No, Gale. I'll be fine. Plus you have a bigger family to feed than I do," I sniffled again. He shot his arrow and hit a squirrel right in its neck."Nice," I complimented him. "Lets move. The mother deer just went behind that tree," I hadnt seen it, ofcourse. I rubbed my eye as we went to sit behind a large rock near the tree. "Its eating," He said, pulling his arrow back. Then I felt that familiar tickle in the back of my nose. It gradually grew as Gale studied the deer. " Injured foot," He said. By now the tickle was unbearable. I tried to hold it back..I didnt like to sneeze in front of people. But it came out anyways. "H'INGSSH!" I tried to stifle it, but it was still loud. The deer scurried off. Gale looked at me. "Sorry," I said. " Its fine. But we do need to bring home dinner. So lets move," He said. I still felt like I had to sneeze, so I let them out while we were walking. " aisHOO...ASHOO!!" I sneezed into my elbow. " Bless you," Gale said. " Thank you,"We arrived in the clearing silently and hid behind a large bush. There were two deer. And three rabbits. That was the good thing about spring. Lots of deer. I loved spring..I just hated my allergies. I pulled back my arrow and shot a rabbit in the eye. " There you go," said Gale. I smiled. After collecting the rabbit I shot a deer in its throat, killing it instantly. Gale shot a bigger rabbit in the temple and it flew backwards. "Wow," I said. A sliht breeze blew and a bunch of cherry blossoms fluttered down over my face. It felt like a million tiny pricks in the back of my nose. " EESCHHOO..HA-IESSHHOO..IESSHHHHHOOO HA-ESHHHOOO...ESSSSHHHHOoOO!"Every animal still there scurried off. Gale looked shocked. "Wow, bless you!" He said. I sniffled. " Sorry, its the pollen," He nodded. " Are you sure you dont want to go home?" he asked. I nodded. " You shouldnt have to hunt for be, Gale. Im cabable of doing it byself," I sniffled again. " Whatever you say, Catnip," He said.What do you think?? Is it stupid...uneventful? Any ideas?? Constructive critisism?? I'm okay with whatever you have to say, just comment! If you dont like it..i wont continue.Sorry for the length!! Its really hard to type on my phone so I have to do a bit at a time. If you DO want more just say the word! Link to comment
v a n i l l a Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 I like this. :3 Continue! Maybe have her entered in the Hunger Games, and have the allergies turn into illness...? ;3 Just an idea Link to comment
M_Twi_Love Posted February 12, 2013 Author Share Posted February 12, 2013 Cool idea!! Thanks!! Link to comment
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