megacycle Posted October 11, 2012 Share Posted October 11, 2012 That was just amazing. I love how you describe everything so well. I think this particular giantess may have just caught herself a cold from her unexpected visitors. Link to comment
Curiosity234 Posted October 11, 2012 Share Posted October 11, 2012 Talk about poor manners... sneezing uncovered is one thing, but sneezing in someone's NOSE? That's just rude! x3 Link to comment
dontnoqit Posted October 12, 2012 Share Posted October 12, 2012 A second part of the best giantess story I've read in a looooong while. Definitely my lucky day! Link to comment
Chronosynclastic Posted October 12, 2012 Author Share Posted October 12, 2012 Thank you, everyone, for your kind compliments.Since this story has turned out to be so popular, I'm going to start working on a third chapter for it. I can't say for sure how long it will take, as I'm also interested in writing stories for a few other, non-giantess ideas I've had, but I promise to keep working at it until it's finished.In the meantime, I hope you continue to enjoy reading my stories -- I certainly enjoy writing them! Link to comment
Animeeze Posted November 8, 2012 Share Posted November 8, 2012 The way you desrice the torture and the buildup from the inside out without even using verbal sounds to convey the buildup is just spectacular. I feel like I am a little late to the game catching this second story, but it is so awesome that I have to comment. You did such an incredible job! Link to comment
Hissybella Posted November 8, 2012 Share Posted November 8, 2012 OMG I LOVE THIS. as a child I've always dreamed of stories of sneezing inside a giant's nose. Sneeze-ception XD Link to comment
mysterysneeze Posted November 12, 2016 Share Posted November 12, 2016 I recently reread this story and I have to say there are fun character development moments throughout the chapters. Your writing has a fun way of describing mess that is your own way. The giantess herself had a beautiful description as well as some characteristics from each of the main cast of characters. It was a fitting ending to have the snobbish girl also catch a cold. The writing itself was witty, enjoyable, and the characters were engaging to read about. It wasn't just the sneezing that I enjoyed. The sneezes themselves were pleasing to say the least Also, having a sneeze be the cause of the giantess's sneeze is a twist I don't think I've ever seen used so engagingly. It wasn't just one sneeze that broke the giantess's senses, but multiple. The gradual build and intensity of both chapters was a blast to read! Link to comment
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